i used to cry cause of you

i used to cry cause of you

A Story by aaron

      

 I used to cry

 

Because  of you!!!!                                      

Day and night

I would think about you and cry 

Because you hurt me so bad  

You hurt me just because

I wouldn't have sex with you

You were so stupid for doing that

I was smart 

Because I made the right decision .

Aaron I think this would make a great poem... Your words are heartfelt. Continue being who you are and waiting. You made the right decision.

© 2010 aaron


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A lot of wisdom in your words. If we use up all the sweet things. When the time is right for a life and children you can be prepared and swim in the gift of true love. Wasted gifts leave us wishing for better decisions. A very good poem.
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Posted 11 Years Ago


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as i describe my poems, simple yet complex. such a delicate peice with such a brutal meaning. the thing i like is that one cant help but to think there is a deeper meaning than he poem itslef. short and simple, good job

Posted 11 Years Ago


thank you

Posted 11 Years Ago


wonderful expression of thoughts

Posted 11 Years Ago


thanx you guys

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a great poem, very simple, but with great meaning. You know i can relate very well to this, almost everyone can... This world has become about sex... nothing more and I don't see the point of that. Those very people are stupid, you well never find love when you only care about that one thing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


ya thats so true

Posted 11 Years Ago


You have probably made the right choice my friend. There will be the right time for serious relations and young guys don't understand that. They don't think well when all the blood has travelled south of their brain.

Posted 11 Years Ago


thanks very much

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is good and easy to relate to i loved it great job

Posted 11 Years Ago



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