Rains That No One Cares

Rains That No One Cares

A Poem by Abby L.

::Do not be fooled by the title, its about me not being able to think::


I am stuck

Deep down in a muck, 

a kind of deep, deep stuck

And apparently, I am out of luck

I don’t know what to do!

They’re all the same! 

Emotional, adventurous, another one or two!

I’ve lost this stupid, amazing game

If only my hand would pick up this pen 

and write my heart out line after line,

I would not think it a sin, 

If all the work weren’t mine

What am I saying?

Ranting crazily,

I can’t think of the rhymes to fill these gaps

you see?

Thoughts blurt out into space, 

not going anywhere

When there by grace!

I just can’t transfer them here 

To me,

I wish I could see 

The crazy thoughts spilling from cracks and croughts

To get an idea

an inspiration?

Just something one-in-a-million! 

Something no nation!

Has ever seen or done or heard of

Well I guess I’m through

My mind is dry

The words that flew like rivers are somewhere in the sky

Lets just wait until another rain, to write about my past and future and dreams here and there

After all, its not like many people care

© 2015 Abby L.

Author's Note

Abby L.
I'm just weird. That's all I have to say.
Anyway, thank you for reading, please, please, please, please, review and criticize on this, I think its comical and stupid, but I am me and you are you so I rest my case.
Have a wonderful, beautiful, amazing, great day!

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Great work!!!! .... I could relate to this because I'm going through the same phase . Really expressive

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Added on October 9, 2015
Last Updated on October 9, 2015
Tags: thoughts, weird, stuck, stall, block, poetry, writing, thinking, rain, crazy


Abby L.
Abby L.


Hello! I'm Abby! I write various things, but my main content is poetry. I'm from Alabama, USA. I'm involved in various hobbies, but I have a strong passion for music and most of the arts. I'm not ver.. more..