A Sigh

A Sigh

A Poem by Abdul Aziz

For every furtive sigh that never leaves my aching soul,
There grows a lump inside my throat that makes me think of you
And soothes the cinders of my mind emblazoned with your name,
Despite the pain of knowing I might never be with you.

© 2011 Abdul Aziz


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A sigh is all that came out of me after I read this. It was a longing sigh for sure, one telling of the pain you speak off. Truly a mesmerizing write, as short as it is, in conveying the sentiments of anguish.
"knowing I might never be with you" - produces such a lump inside my throat and having to swallow it, kind of hurts.

Awesome write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow! Short and simple and flawless in every way. If I was to quote the best lines, I would quote everything. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Abdul Aziz

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
Gleb Zavlanov

8 Years Ago

My pleasure.
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Very nice! It is nice to see that you can capture the emotions of your readers with merely six lines..

Posted 9 Years Ago


LOVELY!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


"And soothes the cinders of my mind emblazoned with your name".
Wonderful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautiful, absolutely beautiful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Damn I came back to read this again it is damn good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Now that is good .I like it very much

Posted 11 Years Ago


A sigh is all that came out of me after I read this. It was a longing sigh for sure, one telling of the pain you speak off. Truly a mesmerizing write, as short as it is, in conveying the sentiments of anguish.
"knowing I might never be with you" - produces such a lump inside my throat and having to swallow it, kind of hurts.

Awesome write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's mystic how these surreal memories appear between the blank stares. Pain portrayed simply. :) Keep writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Abdul Aziz
Abdul Aziz

Chennai, Tamil Nadu, India



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Hello there. I'm a medical doctor by profession, in search of a better career. Right now, my only pastime seems to be navigating around the vicissitudes of life. I'm passionate about computers and p.. more..

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