A poet's heart

What is in a poet's heart. Or at least mine

Maybe all poets’ hearts are heavy

from staring too long into the sun

wondering how it sets in the evening

Reviews

[Nelyn Salvaleon]

This is quite true for me. I thought I'm the only one who writes poem containing only one stanza (that's why I didn't post some of my poems 😂), but now I know I'm not the only one. By the way, I love this one!

[bee]

Thank you very much, Nelyn

[Jimmy Yetts]

A moment well-captured.
Wonderment is a sharp arrow in the poet's quiver.
Enjoyed the read, Bee!

[bee]

Thank you very much, Jimmy

[Nicole]

I think you’re so right. For me it’s the moon. I watch her and try to make her stay as long as possible...the heavy heart though...I feel it. Such a thoughtful poem.

[bee]

Thank you so much for your kind review, Nicole

[Chris Shaw]

A nice little piece of brevity to ponder on bee. I would say there are many chambers in a poet's heart. Heavy sometimes, but there is so much more.

Chris

[bee]

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, Chris!

[Iamsolistless]

Short, simple and on point. This is a very precise piece. I wish I could write like this😍🤩

[bee]

Thank you so much for your kind words!

[Ted Kniffen]

At times poet's hearts are heavy and they write introspective poems that touch the psyche ... other times the heart grows light and the poems tend to reflect the happiness within ... but staring into the sun may help to understand the relentless quest to understand.

a good write, bee.

Take care ... be safe

[bee]

Thank you for your thoughts and kind words, Ted.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Bee... the Poets heart is light as a feather in sunny weather; however... when Ill winds blow and storms destroy homes and trees... the birds have a heavy heart and need us to leave Seed to nourish and provide the Will to presevere. truly, Pat

[bee]

Hello Pat, thank you so much for your kind words

[Reinrose]

Maybe...or are they waiting for the sunrise? Read Vagrant Mongrel, he has a poem about that:)

[bee]

Yeah. Maybe. Would definitely be the more pleasurable version :) Thanks for the recommendation, I'll check it out!