The man with a dagger

The man with a dagger

A Poem by dicey jones
"

He is here...be afraid!

"
The man with a dagger
Walks with a stagger;  
     oh yes he limps
     his face is slimy.
He comes in the Dark
the Blunt dagger and hammer on his hand. 

On the recess of your mind
Sleeping away from time; 
    dreams of your fantasy
    nightmares they become. 
He places the dagger on your skull
Swiftly with the hammer he hits the core; 
                               blood splashes away 
                               drains enough to feed.
He leaves you alive
Unconscious you're; 
    the man with the dagger keeps coming
    night after night, until your life dies away.
                        

 
  

© 2013 dicey jones


Author's Note

dicey jones
Let me know if it scared you...

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It didn't scare me but it conveys very strong sadistic elements which make it darker and heading in that direction, at least for me. I like the dark stuff so these are up my alley.
I feel also this piece in my views was almost metaphorical for so many things of a darker nature that I think you are definitely capturing the mood you're looking for.
I like this, keep it coming.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dicey jones

11 Years Ago

thanks... now I've got to go make something that would have the capability to scare the s**t off you.. read more
unsavable_soul

11 Years Ago

I believe you will indeed achieve your goal in this...
Sincerely
Chris



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na i wasn't scared. just wondered what the write is up to....
and in the end various images like of 'time' emerged.

nicely written

Posted 11 Years Ago


It didn't scare me but it conveys very strong sadistic elements which make it darker and heading in that direction, at least for me. I like the dark stuff so these are up my alley.
I feel also this piece in my views was almost metaphorical for so many things of a darker nature that I think you are definitely capturing the mood you're looking for.
I like this, keep it coming.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dicey jones

11 Years Ago

thanks... now I've got to go make something that would have the capability to scare the s**t off you.. read more
unsavable_soul

11 Years Ago

I believe you will indeed achieve your goal in this...
Sincerely
Chris
it did a bit haha, i like how it's written so sinister.

Posted 11 Years Ago


dicey jones

11 Years Ago

a bit?! next one might be more than that... thanks for your review.

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Added on April 6, 2013
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Tags: Horror

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dicey jones
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Aboki, Nigeria



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