The man with a dagger

The man with a dagger

A Poem by dicey jones
"

He is here...be afraid!

"
The man with a dagger
Walks with a stagger;  
     oh yes he limps
     his face is slimy.
He comes in the Dark
the Blunt dagger and hammer on his hand. 

On the recess of your mind
Sleeping away from time; 
    dreams of your fantasy
    nightmares they become. 
He places the dagger on your skull
Swiftly with the hammer he hits the core; 
                               blood splashes away 
                               drains enough to feed.
He leaves you alive
Unconscious you're; 
    the man with the dagger keeps coming
    night after night, until your life dies away.
                        

 
  

© 2013 dicey jones


Author's Note

dicey jones
Let me know if it scared you...

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It didn't scare me but it conveys very strong sadistic elements which make it darker and heading in that direction, at least for me. I like the dark stuff so these are up my alley.
I feel also this piece in my views was almost metaphorical for so many things of a darker nature that I think you are definitely capturing the mood you're looking for.
I like this, keep it coming.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dicey jones

8 Years Ago

thanks... now I've got to go make something that would have the capability to scare the s**t off you.. read more
unsavable_soul

8 Years Ago

I believe you will indeed achieve your goal in this...
Sincerely
Chris



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na i wasn't scared. just wondered what the write is up to....
and in the end various images like of 'time' emerged.

nicely written

Posted 8 Years Ago


It didn't scare me but it conveys very strong sadistic elements which make it darker and heading in that direction, at least for me. I like the dark stuff so these are up my alley.
I feel also this piece in my views was almost metaphorical for so many things of a darker nature that I think you are definitely capturing the mood you're looking for.
I like this, keep it coming.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dicey jones

8 Years Ago

thanks... now I've got to go make something that would have the capability to scare the s**t off you.. read more
unsavable_soul

8 Years Ago

I believe you will indeed achieve your goal in this...
Sincerely
Chris
it did a bit haha, i like how it's written so sinister.

Posted 8 Years Ago


dicey jones

8 Years Ago

a bit?! next one might be more than that... thanks for your review.

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Added on April 6, 2013
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Aboki, Nigeria



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