~My Red, Red Sea Of Love~

~My Red, Red Sea Of Love~

A Poem by Gamitsuki
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Love has its own language.......

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There's a whole sea of love in my chest
   Of red colored in love
Love is bouncing in my heart
   Like a bunny out of its burrow.

Ah! my chest is going to explode
   This love is huge like the endless sky.
Like the red, red rose of lullaby bay
   It sings me tunes of the rainbow of love.

My gal is such a bonnie lass
           Brownish strands of hair, with glasses on.
Brown eyes like the dusk of noon.
           I wish to drink those two beauties
Those beauties I dream the whole day.
            It doesn't matter to me what she is?
'cause I know who she is.
         She is the most lovely person I had ever seen.

She is in my red sea of love
   Only she and she will be there.
Oh! I want to jump in with her
   Into my red sea of love together.

Even in the millennia I have spend with her
   I would still love her like we are in zero-time
My love for this beauty of sonnets
   Will never fade away even in the darkest dawn.

© 2014 Gamitsuki


Author's Note

Gamitsuki
Love her very much but can never say......!!! It hurtz.......

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Amazing words for love.
"My gal is such a bonnie lass
Brownish strands of hair, with glasses on.
Brown eyes like the dusk of noon.
I wish to drink those two beauties
Those beauties I dream the whole day.
It doesn't matter to me what she is?
'cause I know who she is.
She is the most lovely person I had ever seen."
I would believe a bit of Irish in you. I enjoyed the poem. A joyous song for love on the outstanding words.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Gamitsuki

8 Years Ago

really sir,
thank you so so much......don't have any words to say.....:-)))).....glad you en.. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome and I enjoyed your work.
Lovely and intense to the cores. Pen on till love is overwhelming in the world....:)......

Posted 8 Years Ago


Gamitsuki

8 Years Ago

Truly thanks for your great comment......i appreciate it very much....!! :-))
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are welcome muchly. ......:)......
Gamitsuki

8 Years Ago

:-))))...........
Great similes within this poem, truly describes her beauty in a way no-one's really described someone before! Well done, if you love that girl immensely, all you need is courage! You can do it, BELIEVE! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gamitsuki

9 Years Ago

'TrUlY' thnks FROM ME...hope i can someday gain enough courage......
1Disawsum

9 Years Ago

One day you will! :)
Gamitsuki

9 Years Ago

thnkx......................

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Added on September 19, 2014
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Gamitsuki
Gamitsuki

India



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I am a boy who loves singing, poetry, athletics, writing, studying, etc. I like to make friends and sometimes I over-do it. I love my mother very very much. When I was small, I had got a neck disab.. more..

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