The Blue Icicle

The Blue Icicle

A Poem by Gamitsuki
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Never pretend what you want to show...but pretend what you truly feel......

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The Blue Icicle
                   -By Gamitsuki
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In the summery caves of warmness,

Somewhere deep a icy blue icicle has grown,
Not in a millennium but in a timeless moment,
Given an unbearable painful echoing tone.


Tears drop by drop falling from the tip,
Into the depths of nothingness sip by sip,
The icicle grows to the endless end as it weep.

© 2015 Gamitsuki


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Gamitsuki
I hope you EnjoY...... ::--))

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Nice Cavern Poem I been to the Cavern tours Nice to have visited cold down deep in the earth.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Gamitsuki

6 Years Ago

really smittyJas......i am sure that must have been so fun......thank you for your review.....i hope.. read more
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It's beautiful but it's too short :).. "Not in a millennium but in a moment timeless" I think there is a grammatical mistake here it should be " not a millennium but in a timeless moment' ... I love it too :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Gamitsuki

6 Years Ago

thank you very much...and you are right......thanks for correcting me.....n sorry...'cause it's shor.. read more

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Added on August 17, 2015
Last Updated on August 27, 2015
Tags: blue, icicle, heart, warmness, icy, tears, love, weep

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Gamitsuki
Gamitsuki

India



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I am a boy who loves singing, poetry, athletics, writing, studying, etc. I like to make friends and sometimes I over-do it. I love my mother very very much. When I was small, I had got a neck disab.. more..

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