Love you

Love you

A Poem by ur_ginger_girl
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A poem of love

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Love You

 

How life love sadness How life loves to break your heart.Babe I loved you from the start

.Your the one that I love I'll love you with all my heart.Your the man of my dreams I'll always love you know matter what it means I love you. I love you alot but you hate me it seems.But thats all right because you love me in my dreams.

 

By Absule

© 2010 ur_ginger_girl


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Wow that's awesome! I do suggest maybe using a bit more punctuation but overall it's really good!
The last line makes it perfect. =]

xx Love.Stained

Posted 9 Years Ago


i'm not usually one for rhyming poems, but this really sparked my mind; i'm in love with the ending.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on January 2, 2010
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