rage

rage

A Poem by ace

rage that blinds rage that covers all i am in a film of red
rage rage for the way i was damaged and those who are dead
but who do i blame for this accursed affliction
do i listen to the ghosts benediction
he wants to temper my rage forge it for revenge
but how far will i go on this binge
once begun will i ever be able to bring an end
before my sword finds those who were once  friends
am i willing to let this rage destroy all that i am
or will i hid cowering from the storm like a lamb
will i fight to my last breath
for death seeks death
will i be less of a son
if this war is never begun
 

© 2009 ace


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ace
hamlet

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Really great, I'm gonna have to say rage is a really good word, not too generalized like "anger" and "mad", it has a little more personality to it. I like the emotion in the poem, I don't know if you meant to put it there (It's based off of Hamlet?), but I see it nonetheless. Great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I liked it! And I liked that it is based off Hamlet. But I think that you should try to use the word "rage" a little less. Maybe use a synonym like anger.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on November 4, 2009

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ace
ace

statesboro, GA



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i have always believed everyone has a story to tell and i want to hear every single one of them more..

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A Poem by ace