Dark Love

Dark Love

A Poem by Acucena G.
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Its about a person whom have given the love to a lover , but the lover did not return the love.

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Love made me see .

How is the feeling of being rejected.

Let my being devastated .

You have awaken the beast inside me.

Couldn’t avoid the impact

Of what you have done to my heart

© 2013 Acucena G.


Author's Note

Acucena G.
I hope you comment and give your opnion , don't forget to rate, thank you in advance.

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This seems to be a different genre than I have come accustomed to viewing on your page, and quite the successful have at it as well. The only problems I detected were small and of the grammar type. You may view my thoughts below:

How is the feeling of being rejected.--------how the feeling of being rejected is
Let my being devastated .------------------------left my being devastated
You have awaken the beast inside me.-------you have awakened the beast inside me
Couldn’t avoid the impact-------------------------one that couldnt avoid the impact
Of what you have done to my heart------------from what you have done to my heart

Overall great poem Acucena, as always!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like the direct and honest words. Photo gave life to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


I have felt this! Most of the time this certain type of emotion is what inspires me to write.. I like Dark love. Good stuff:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This seems to be a different genre than I have come accustomed to viewing on your page, and quite the successful have at it as well. The only problems I detected were small and of the grammar type. You may view my thoughts below:

How is the feeling of being rejected.--------how the feeling of being rejected is
Let my being devastated .------------------------left my being devastated
You have awaken the beast inside me.-------you have awakened the beast inside me
Couldn’t avoid the impact-------------------------one that couldnt avoid the impact
Of what you have done to my heart------------from what you have done to my heart

Overall great poem Acucena, as always!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark. I wonder, is there any inkling of revenge or hope? Especially with the "beast".

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love is an evil game with high stakes. Good little poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh the devestation of rejection! A very strightforward take on the plights of a breakup, and yet the way you wield the words, "beast," "impact," and "rejection" they hold way more power than 6 lines look like they should. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think we've all felt this beast, some in more ways than one, the aftermath can be like an Apocalypse, some don't ever recover, nicely pen'd.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Acucena G.

10 Years Ago

Thank you FRIEDA.
My friend, thank you for inviting me to read your fine poem. I have felt this pain many times before, but I react differently than most and can happily say that I am still friends with every woman I have ever been involved with, regardless of how it ended. Very nice my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Acucena G.

10 Years Ago

Yeah its hard to face, but the life doesn't stop and if we stop we will never be happy. Thank you JA.. read more
A one-way street love is very hard. You have penned a good poem on this subject...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Acucena G.

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and commenting SAMI KHALIL
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...Any time...:)
unrequited love....i am far too learned on this subject. you handle it with kid gloves, very personal and yet, distantly. i love the emotions of this piece, and the portrait is beautiful.....well penned!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Acucena G.

10 Years Ago

I think that we all have had that moment and even though the pain tht it caused us, we moved on . I .. read more
quinfinn

10 Years Ago

immensely

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Added on May 22, 2013
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Tags: love, pain, heart, teen, young, adult, dark, suffer, happy, passion, sad, intrigue, truth, tears

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Acucena G.
Acucena G.

Chimoio, centre, Mozambique



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