I miss you

I miss you

A Poem by Ada Slowe

I wish that I would have known

The secrets you hid so deep inside

The darkness That was surrounding you

So that you couldn't see the light

You were so young and beautiful

And you had so much to give

The only word I can manage now is why

You had so many years to come

So what made you decide to quit

I had no idea you were so lost

or carried so much hurt inside

I think about you all the time

And I have so much regret

Was there anything I could've done

If I had only seen

I guess I'll never know or understand

why you took your own life

I wonder why you thought life wasn't worth the fight

cause it certainly is there's so much you'll never see

But I hope your happy now


I miss you :/

Rest In Piece

© 2012 Ada Slowe

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very well written

Posted 7 Years Ago

Ada Slowe

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much
i like it

Posted 7 Years Ago

Ada Slowe

7 Years Ago


7 Years Ago

ur welcome
We can't read minds to see whats going on in the next person's head we as people sometimes are excellent at hiding our inner demons or issues not being able to be noticed by anybody. things often happen to where it leaves us thinking or asking ourselves was there something I could have done or something I missed. Nice read here on deep feeling of loss and missed answers. As always keep writing fellow writer.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Ada Slowe

7 Years Ago

Thank you.

7 Years Ago

You're very welcome
I'm sorry about your loss, but this is a very beautiful poem. Good writing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

Ada Slowe

7 Years Ago

Thank you. (:

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Added on June 7, 2012
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Ada Slowe
Ada Slowe

Ithaca , NY

My name is Ada... Writing is the one thing that has always been there for me. I've been doing it since I was a kid, it's always been my dream to write for a living... Quotes I love: "I kept always .. more..


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