Weather, I See

Weather, I See

A Poem by stargirl23

rays of light embolden your smile-lines

a pale-palette sky darkens your mouth

rain from above slides under your eyes

lightning reflects in the black clouds of your pupils

golden light turns you into a different color

a hurricane spins us ’round

an earthquake causes us to split

© 2016 stargirl23


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I feel your words as I read them. Your unique way of expressing yourself is amazing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


stargirl23

6 Years Ago

Thanks again for you kind words:)
Very well done, and I love the ending. Its fabulous!

Posted 6 Years Ago


stargirl23

6 Years Ago

Thank you a lot!
So beautiful, and captivating. Great work:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


stargirl23

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!
Beautiful and so potently reaching Adi...you really captivated so much here, fabulous! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


stargirl23

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words!
Very nice poem!
Keep up the great work!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


stargirl23

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much!!

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Added on March 5, 2016
Last Updated on March 5, 2016
Tags: poem, love, weather, breakup

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A Poem by stargirl23