A Heaven for Stars

stars’ passion is what makes them ignite

casting a luminescent glow unto our lives

and although some think of them

simply as external flares with gaseous insides

they do no harm, save put strain on our necks--

for we seem to love to look up--

so when they collapse in a last fiery display

do they not go to Heaven?

Reviews

[Cyndy Robinson]

Love the symbology in this. Would have chosen a different ending. I think most of us tend to think of the starts as being heavenly.

[stargirl23]

Interesting, I'll look at it again

[dan]

Adi, The sky filled with stars represents such peaceful and melodic romantic representations. In this piece you imbue them with life, personifying them with human like qualities...brilliant imagery! It takes a good bit of talent to say so much in such a short write but you have achieved it successfully here. Great job! take care...dan

[stargirl23]

Thank you!

[Emily]

Lovely poem!
Keep up the great work!

[stargirl23]

Thank you so much!