A Heaven for Stars

A Heaven for Stars

A Poem by stargirl23

stars’ passion is what makes them ignite

casting a luminescent glow unto our lives

and although some think of them

simply as external flares with gaseous insides

they do no harm, save put strain on our necks--

for we seem to love to look up--

so when they collapse in a last fiery display

do they not go to Heaven?

© 2016 stargirl23


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Love the symbology in this. Would have chosen a different ending. I think most of us tend to think of the starts as being heavenly.

Posted 6 Years Ago


stargirl23

6 Years Ago

Interesting, I'll look at it again
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Adi, The sky filled with stars represents such peaceful and melodic romantic representations. In this piece you imbue them with life, personifying them with human like qualities...brilliant imagery! It takes a good bit of talent to say so much in such a short write but you have achieved it successfully here. Great job! take care...dan

Posted 6 Years Ago


stargirl23

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
Lovely poem!
Keep up the great work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


stargirl23

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!

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Added on April 3, 2016
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Tags: poem, stars, universe, religion, God, Heaven

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