I Shower in You

I Shower in You

A Poem by stargirl23

when I shower, I reflect on you

so that's what the water turns into

a sporadic cone around me

warm, soothing, hard to break free

drops slide down me 'till I am cleansed

through you and of you, my loving friend

my heart wails out melodies 'till you make me cough

a spluttering jolt that helps me turn you off

© 2016 stargirl23


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dan
Adi, an incredible metaphorical definition of one's thought process surrounding a deep love, and a bit of a twist at the end stating that maybe the reflections on that love need to be reined in at times to prevent the SHOWER from drowning the one lost in reflection. Very nicely done. take care...dan

Posted 6 Years Ago


stargirl23

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
That's so nice to read..full of warmth..good write Adi..

Posted 6 Years Ago


stargirl23

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
Randhir kaur

6 Years Ago

Mentn nt..

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Added on April 3, 2016
Last Updated on April 3, 2016
Tags: poem, love, emotion, thoughts, shower

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