Two Comets

Two Comets

A Poem by stargirl23

to behold the light display when two comets collide 

is a beloved sight for a remote audience, but

those close to them are hurt�"for no fault save their own

they do not know it is better to leave them alone

the comets follow their streaking tails and starlight gut

to have a new comet form from their crumbled sides

© 2016 stargirl23


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Very thought provoking. Meaning upon meaning, depending on where you want to go with it. Love it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


stargirl23

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
This is intense Adi...made me think :) Something so tangible about this piece...

Posted 6 Years Ago


stargirl23

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, love that it provoked some thoughts!
I loved this!
Keep it up!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


stargirl23

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much:)

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Added on April 3, 2016
Last Updated on April 3, 2016
Tags: poem, love, gay, comets, universe

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A Poem by stargirl23