Discrete Downfalls

Discrete Downfalls

A Poem by Aekmy

You seek the green trees, a warm breeze,
yet all you receive are the wilting
petals I manage to bloom.

You search for life, desperate for one high.
A train comes by and you're gone,
only to be forgotten.

You sing a song and I listen for too long.
Your voice is wrong in my ears
and I'm done sitting here.

© 2011 Aekmy

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You seem expert to me. I like this style and your skills. Easy to read.....enjoyable.....appropriate pics.....lots of beauty throughout.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Too many people are never satisfied... always thinking something is better out there and end up losing what they really needed. Great poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on May 29, 2011
Last Updated on May 29, 2011



There is beauty is uniqueness. Embrace the strange or perish in the ordinary.

"Leaving the page of the book carelessly open, something unsaid, the phone off the hook and the love, whatever it was, an infection. - Anne Sexton" more..

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