A Walk

Walking in nature and how i see it

A walk.

Its a fine day.

A walk.

Its the middle of May.

A walk.

The trees have begun to loose their leaves.

A walk.

Its crisp and cool out to day with the breeze.

A walk.

The stream is trickling along.

A walk.

This path seems good so i sing a song.

A walk.

Look at all these birds.

A walk.

Its so peaceful out here I have no words.

A walk.

Into the middle of nowhere.

A walk.

Into the middle of anywhere.

Reviews

[Jesse Jacques]

i really liked it. i love how "a walk" was repeated over and over. good job

[justice]

This is really a nice sentiment. The feeling that you create with the repetition is really a nice thing. I do have to ask why you bolded and underlined "a walk" every time. I found it a little distracting. Just my opinion though. :) Really a nice poem. thank you for sharing it! All the best.
J

[Alexa Tasch]

good job katie i really like it i do but i think it would be better if it werer I walk instead of a walk but that is just my opinion