Please Tell Him

Please Tell Him

A Poem by Blue
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a goodbye poem

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Please tell him I will miss him
when fate bids us apart.
 'Cause though we love each other,
ours is a hopeless art.

The time with him I spent
is best of all the  best,
a "then" worth looking back
as bird longs for its nest.

This poem will cause him heartache,
but dread not the goodbyes.
I'm sure we're soulmates somewhere
where our forever lies...

© 2014 Blue


Author's Note

Blue
Reposted from my old account. It was previously entitled "To Him".

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I feel this with a couple people, could we have more than one soulmate?

and why is it that we seldom end up with the soulmates....something interferes...the bond still remains, though.
this is a beautifully mournful write...can't believe I missed this back then. And it is so good to see you here again, Blue.
j.
j.

Posted 2 Days Ago


Blue

2 Days Ago

Happy to see you still very active here after all these years, Sir. And I'm flattered you remember m.. read more
Sometime love cannot be.
"Cause though we love each other,
ours is a hopeless art."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry dear Poet.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very heart breakingly sad, as are most goodbye poems.
Short but so deep and meaningful still.
A Love that just isn't meant to be. Sad but it happens I guess.
Sure allot of people could relate to this hun.
Another master piece, by the great Blue :)


Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow so beautiful and so tragic!! I love it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Parting can be sad but you have conveyed the experience with sincere emotion, splendid indeed!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Blue

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Tom.
yes i can totally relate to that..but even if you told him now, he will cry ..I'm nearly sure !
Well done

Posted 7 Years Ago


Blue

7 Years Ago

I'm sure of that, too. :) Thanks, Suhad!
stars are far

7 Years Ago

Great poem, really relatable. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Blue

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!

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