I HAVE FOUND MY LIFE IN YOU

I HAVE FOUND MY LIFE IN YOU

A Poem by afra

I will walk behind you

And break all other ties

I will leave the path that

Does not lead to you

I will attach my all dreams

And hope with you

I will break all my other relationships

With a smile for you

I will only maintain a relationship 

Of heart with you

I will give you my everything 

I'll give up my life for you

My life is now attached with yours

I have found my happiness in you

My heart will beat with the beat of your heart 

I have seen my heaven in you 

I will love you forever 

Cause I have found my life in you

© 2012 afra


Author's Note

afra
I know I am not good at writing love poem ..but still tell what you think

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This poem has a gentle, friendly feel. It speaks of commitment and attachment bringing joy and friendship. I like the way you repeat the expression 'in you' throughout the poem, focusing the reader's attention on the recipient. Hopefully, the offer will be reciprocated.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Nice piece of writing. The words felt sincerely from deep within

Posted 11 Years Ago


This works nicely and shows the devotion you are meaning to convey - I enjoyed reading it very much

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very passionate and emotional good job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


afra

11 Years Ago

thanks
Ah the dreaded love poem, it can be a heartless mistress at the best of time, I can ateste to that! However you've played your hand well, flows perfectly, well done good read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


afra

11 Years Ago

thank you ...I am glad you liked it
Thomas Fitzgerald

11 Years Ago

your welcome x
Love this and can relate to this. Hope to see more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


afra

11 Years Ago

thanks you ..=)
superb ....that person is really lucky for whom you wrote this poem .....awesome ..as usual ...lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


afra

11 Years Ago

oh harry ...thanks
I can so relate to this right now! Very heartfelt and pretty. I like it a lot. Great job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


afra

11 Years Ago

thank you
I am currently there, so I really felt this piece!

Posted 11 Years Ago


afra

11 Years Ago

thank you
I thought it was just beautiful...it expressed so much love...the hope of a new relationship....

Posted 11 Years Ago


afra

11 Years Ago

tanks you
actually, I think this is the best one you have written yet :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


afra

11 Years Ago

okay ,....thanks a lot

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Toronto, Mississauga, Canada



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