GOOD BYE MY FRIEND

Oh ! the most beautiful creature of God 

its time for you to go 

go to a happy place 

my heart from there  you shall never be erase

Leave all your pain and sorrows 

In your body 

As your soul drains 

Only take your happiness and smiles 

You were special 

So you will be missed my friend 

And you shall never be forgotten 

You'll stay in our hearts till the end 

You will always be safe in my heart 

From there you shall never die 

Its time for us to be apart 

Its time for us to say good bye 

The story of our life never lasts forever 

It has to end 

Till this point we were suppose to be together

So good bye my friend ....

Reviews

[Marissa]

sweet and pretty simple

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good goodbye. I like the hopeful feel of the separation. I like the way you ended the poem.
"Till this point we were suppose to be together
So good bye my friend ...."
Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[mariah]

:) very sweet, and i like the closure of it. this must have felt good to write, becuase i know this came from the heart.
-Mariah

[....]

the memory of us will never end though.
Completely wonderful write.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Just one word: Touching :)
Just so full of pathos !!

[Wild Willow Blue]

This is very sweet. Sad but very sweet.

[BLACK PRINCE]

This is very deep and sad.

You always execute your poems well
wit deep soulful emotions and suspense.

WELL DONE

[Pax]

nicely written. enjoyed it.

[Harley (arbiter)]

This was great. Can really feel the emotion. Awesom

[Lindsay T]

Beautifully written :)