REASON TO STAY ALIVE

REASON TO STAY ALIVE

A Poem by afra

When memories haunt me 
When I get disappointed by my dreams 
When scars  fill my soul 
You come and make me whole 

When my wishes are scattered on the floor 
When my hopes die after seeing all the closed door 
When my world falls apart 
You are the only one who hears the voice of my heart 

When I ball up at the corner of my room
Wishing to end my life soon 
When I decide no longer to stay alive 
Your love becomes the reason to live 

© 2012 afra


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Great metrica, flow and pathos, I really mean it, actually "great" is not enough, but I don't know a stronger word to use :(
A very good use of alliterations (you coMe aNd Make Me whole, for example) and anaphora (WHEN, WHEN, WHEN).
Very original, the idea of taking a chance at visual rhymes, I mean.
Great job =D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Great Flow and emotions here... very good !!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love the way it reads, and it's wrote very nicely

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great metrica, flow and pathos, I really mean it, actually "great" is not enough, but I don't know a stronger word to use :(
A very good use of alliterations (you coMe aNd Make Me whole, for example) and anaphora (WHEN, WHEN, WHEN).
Very original, the idea of taking a chance at visual rhymes, I mean.
Great job =D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful and hopeful poem. We need someone to give us reasons to be happy and forget our sadness.
"When my world falls apart
You are the only one who hears the voice of my heart "
Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


emotional read, so well expressed

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love this, reason to go on. Giving hope.

Posted 8 Years Ago


nice ...........//

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a sweet poem. I like the ryhmne scheme and the emotion(:

Posted 8 Years Ago


l was left wondering who or what you could possibly be talking to or about. That is what I like best.

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow this is very well written and i know some can relate really well to this such as i, and i have to say it is definitely my new favorite

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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