I Guess

I Guess

A Poem by Adrian X Fuentess
"

it's not the end

"

AFTER OVERCOMING THE STORM

AND HAVING WALKED ON BROKEN GLASS;

AFTER HAVING GONE THROUGH SUCH PAIN

AND HAVING DRAINED HALF MY SELF;

AFTER CRYING AND PARANOIA,

AFTER HATRED AND SO-CALLED LOVE,

AFTER HAPPINESS,

AFTER HARSHNESS,

-MORE IMPOTANTLY, - AFTER YOU:

I GUESS,

I’LL BE OKAY…

© 2011 Adrian X Fuentess


Author's Note

Adrian X Fuentess
whats your biggest obstacle that you have overcome?

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I like this - we are all okay even after tragedy if we allow ourselves to be.

My biggest obstacle has been the depression that I've had since childhood. It would have been much easier to hide away from the world in a fetal position for the rest of my life but I fought to overcome it instead.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like this - we are all okay even after tragedy if we allow ourselves to be.

My biggest obstacle has been the depression that I've had since childhood. It would have been much easier to hide away from the world in a fetal position for the rest of my life but I fought to overcome it instead.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The biggest obstacle that I have overcome is watching one of my friends detroy their life. Actually I'm still watching it happen, I can't stop it. But I really like this poem and in the end everything will always be ok. Great piece of writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice work man, just change the have's to having.
Great point about perserverance

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

After having walked or after walking (instead of after have). Same for the rest of the lines

Nice message of hope

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on September 13, 2011
Last Updated on September 24, 2011
Tags: family, life, love, pain, hatred, happiness, heartbroken, teens, school

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Adrian X Fuentess
Adrian X Fuentess

Omaha, NE



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English is my second language, so i do appreciate some pointers in my grammar. Thanks for stopping by, and please feel free to leave me some feedback and coming back. i will return the favor. more..

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