Mental Abuse.

Something is happening to me.

Something I can't control. 

My mind is abusing me. 

I don't have control over my brain.

No one does.

Why am I feeling this way?

I want it to stop.

I need it to stop.

It kills me, its daggers going into my skull.

I  need to get rid of this.

I need to run away.

I need to drown myself.

I need to hang myself.

I need to cut myself.

I need to do all these things to make the pain go away. 

Author's Note

It has no flow. It's bad. It's random. It makes no sense.

Reviews

[Jake Staffeld]

My thoughts have been stated multiple times, so, good job.

[halflives]

I know that feeling. When you think that pain is the only solution. But it's not, and you should never resort to death if you must. Ever.

[Yina]

Know the feeling to well

[Shiningwolf]

I know the pain...just wanting something to relieve it. I myself, try to escape this world when I write. It is the only thing I have lol.

[Also known as Clare.]

It doesn't suck at all . I love it

[Patches I'm not so new..]

sounds to me like someomne on drugs I cannot say that I feelympathy for the poem's persona but this was IMO brought on by their own actions Not a bad poem flows rather well actually

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

Very nice poem. And evryone else's comments have already covered what I wanted to say, so... hmmm... well, it's a great poem nevertheless!

[Rain]

Well, it actually does make alot of sense. I can understand what your trying to express in this poem. Apprently, to get rid of the mental pain, you need to focus your mind on the physical pain...interesting concept. Good write

[trainwreck]

This was actually very good for having almost no flow.

[Sukriti Suki]

I liked how you mentioned all the things, drown, hang, cut which will give pain but you want to do it to make THAT pain go away..creative.