What If I Died?

What If I Died?

A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland

  What if I just dropped dead?

  That would make you happy,
  Wouldn't it?

  If my soul was just
  Sucked right out
  Of my body,

  And taken to hell.
  That would put
  A smile on your face,
  Wouldn't it? 

  All of you would laugh,
  And be thankful
  I am dead. 

  Don't worry.

  I will die soon. 

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland


Author's Note

Alice In My Own Wonderland
Probably gonna die soon. I don't know.

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You are a odd writer sometime. Death will come. Few are content when life is stolen from them. No more opportunity for good or bad. Death is a dead end road. No way back and no more opportunity to dance, sing and laugh. A direct to the point poem. A very interesting poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Just a sense of resignation. At some particular moments every one of us is gripped by such a feeling

Posted 8 Years Ago


I'm sure you would survive an atom bomb...

You have too many things left to say for your business to be finished here.

You have also succeeded in scaring the hell out of me....(facepalm)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Makes me think you're just darned complexed. Screaming at yourself...or maybe you're just secretive. Like to keep your feelings bottled up. Dunno *shrug*

Posted 8 Years Ago


strong, raw emotions that are very depressing, expressed fully in this short piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very powerful. Hopefully you don't die soon. You seem to have a lot of fans and friends, judging by the reviews below. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


a powerful, sad piece... it makes me wonder who would be so heartless as to just watch someone die, to let them be taken without a care in the world.

Posted 8 Years Ago


You won't die. If you die, I go with you. Love you forever, Alice :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I am the one who is suppose to die soon sad face =(

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow this is powerful, again if you ever need to talk im here, and even though i don't know you it would be a tragedy if you died

Posted 8 Years Ago



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