What If I Died?

  What if I just dropped dead?

  That would make you happy,

  Wouldn't it?

  If my soul was just

  Sucked right out

  Of my body,

  And taken to hell.

  That would put

  A smile on your face,

  Wouldn't it? 

  All of you would laugh,

  And be thankful

  I am dead. 

  Don't worry.

  I will die soon. 

Author's Note

Probably gonna die soon. I don't know.

Reviews

[brenda]

nooo! dont die !
good poem:) but still dont die!!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

What if I was gone, would you miss me? This hits hard my friend, good poem.

[Fabric Pulse]

=[ Well I'd miss you and want to know I'd have at least tried to talk you out of it.

[zappy]

wow great emotion.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Please don't say things like this.