Nothing Is Left.

Mack and I broke up. Chloe is dead. Life is amazing, isn't it?

  Nothing is left.

  It is all gone.

  All of the smiles

  And laughs.

  All of the tears

  And insults.

  The only thing that

  Remains is my shattered

  Heart,

  Beaten and broken,

  Twitching on the floor.

  You took everything when you left. 

Author's Note

This sucks

Reviews

[WhoIsAmelia?]

it doesn't suck. it's simple, which is what I like about your style of writing. the basic lines also really work for the theme of the poem, because it's as if someone took all the words from your mouth (keyboard?) too. You have a great talent of getting your message across while saying so little. So while the subject is sad, you still have kick-a*s writing skills.

[raindroplove]

i like it:)

[Jake]

Expressive. It works well.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

sincerity in broken pieces~ the emotion in this piece is balanced beautifully~

[Chris]

Raw, truthful and not forced. The things that you are going through must be insanely tough to cope with, but don't let it consume you. Put it into poetry. Certainly helps me to an extent.

[Alexis]

Although I've never experienced this, I could almost still feel like I could relate somehow. This poem didn't suck, and it was actually great. The last line was almost haunting. And sad. Short, powerful poems, like the one you have here, are such a joy to read. But I'm sorry you're having such a hard time. I hope everything brightens up for you ASAP. :) Great job.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really sad and deep. I know you heard this a bunch of times, but I am really sorry. Life can be so hard and difficult in times like this!

[Zack Burton]

No work of art sucks. That's all I'm gonna say. Especially one that holds its own emotional water like this one. I think you did a great job here.

[frozensakura]

its simple and to the point
theres much meaning behind it all
very relatable, i really enjoyed reading it

[kikieatszombies]

this doesn't suck, you have amazing talent. You may not realize it but your poems are incredible and they speak to everybody. Keep up the great work!