Nothing Is Left.

Mack and I broke up. Chloe is dead. Life is amazing, isn't it?

  Nothing is left.

  It is all gone.

  All of the smiles

  And laughs.

  All of the tears

  And insults.

  The only thing that

  Remains is my shattered

  Heart,

  Beaten and broken,

  Twitching on the floor.

  You took everything when you left. 

Author's Note

This sucks

Reviews

[WhoIsAmelia?]

it doesn't suck. it's simple, which is what I like about your style of writing. the basic lines also really work for the theme of the poem, because it's as if someone took all the words from your mouth (keyboard?) too. You have a great talent of getting your message across while saying so little. So while the subject is sad, you still have kick-a*s writing skills.

[Murisaka]

it hides a deeper story, of love, life and a tragic heart break... but things should change, in due time of course, but its things like this that will make people stronger, and more experienced.

[CharlesMonroe]

Life is never gonna stop sucking, I learned that the hard way, but eventually and in weird ways it does get better. Just smile and keep your head up, and don't let the pain control you, and then it'll get better (:

[knixsilva]

youve got a great theme going here but the poem could be better, I think you should work harder on it. Put more meaning into it. More emotion.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

no it does not suck other than the subject - a broken heart and that sucks.
writing about it and this poem does not suck.

Chloe

[Fabric Pulse]

I hope things get better soon, and they will, give it time, but right now it's going to be awful.

[Mack Attack!]

I'm sorry....

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

this doesnt suck at all,but its so sad. so much happening to you at one time. im sorry -these words dont help,or improve your situation but im sorry all the same. *hugs*

great write,written from the heart

[Misty Blue Eyes]

no.. this is a really good poem...i like it

[brenda]

i agree with zappy it doesnt suck it is really good !

[zappy]

no it does not suck its a very nice poem.