All Of The Insults People Have Said To Me

  Yes, I am a stalker-

  I follow you at night.

  Yes, I am a b***h-

  I speak my mind.

  And you were totally

  Right when you said

  I was a s**t.

  I slept with everyone

  On the face of the earth.

  And you are correct, darling.

  I am crazy-

  I believed everything

  You said to me.

  

Author's Note

Messy...

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

"A wise man said
Dont argue with fools
Cause people at a distance
Cant tell who is who" - Jay-Z

Nice work!
I found it to be quite powerful when looking at it from a sarcastic point of view.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

To put one self down in the eyes of another shows low self esteem This is that type of poem and IMHO not really worth the time it took to write--- think what you may opf yourself but show the word a different face be conifdent you are worth more than you think, much more----

[NickyGL]

Nice! this was an emotional piece, its not too messy and its short. nice work!

[Jake]

Dark and emotive. Nice work. :)

P.S. - Some sort of metaphor would work great in here - Up to you though . . .


Jake

[Fabric Pulse]

Raw cut.

[nishantshah2381]

good work

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime better to turn the volume when a foolish person speaks. I believe some people need other people problems to make them feel better. Better to leave them alone to their stories and rumors. I like the directness and honest words in this poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[+Naomi+]

:] I enjoyed reading this.
Great job lol
I especially like the part where you admitting you're stalkin' me xD

[Murisaka]

Wait... your stalking me!?
but on a more serious note. This is not a messy poem, it gives a perfect representation to how humanity really is.. at least the majority of the people

[Kathryn]

I really like this one :) It could maybe do with a little more detail, but the emotion in your work overrides the wording so much that I wouldn't fret about it. A lovely read, well written indeed :)