My Wonderland

My Wonderland

A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland
"

Many things are missing from my Wonderland...

"
  My wonderland is
  Not pretty,
  And filled with singing
  Flowers.

  It is dark and bloody,
  And filled with screaming
  Demons.

  My wonderland doesn't
  Have a wise caterpillar,
  Who gives me advice.

  It has a tall elder man
  Who sits in a chair
  And listens to me complain. 

  My wonderland is
  Not what I wanted it to be.

  It is not pretty and filled
  With singing flowers.

  It does not have a wise
  Caterpillar.

  It doesn't have you. 

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland


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Alice In My Own Wonderland
Just some random thing...

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the flow on this is incredible!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Loved it :) I watched alice in wonderland today, and you have perfectly framed the opposite of the disney image of it :) well written :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


it's wonderful for being random

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well hopefully this special 'you' will join you in your wonderland:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really loved the beginning. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Tragedies happen, but you gotta take it and run with it, learning yourself. =]

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is sad and I can relate to it, you did a great job with the imagery, loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


i like it....

Posted 12 Years Ago


A wonderful poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


very decriptive. well writen as well.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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