Love's Light

Love's Light

A Poem by Amanda
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this is for you...t a, y :) ....

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This love I feel for you is true

It wraps me in the warmth

Of a summer’s day

Enveloping me,

Letting me feel secure

 

I am walking on the sunshine

Provided by your heart and soul

Such sweet euphoria

Elevated by the touch of everlasting

Faith and conviction

 

Surrendering our minds

Giving hearts to the rapture,

The encompassing emotions within

Spirits soaring toward the heavens

Spiraling upward, intertwining in sync

 

Sharing this with you,

Living for today in the light

Cherishing what we have together

Not worrying about tomorrow

For whatever may be…

 

© 2008 Amanda


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Beautiful!! Your prose just rolls off the page Amanda, it is always clear to me when I read whether a writer is seriously in love and you girl are on fire!!! I loved every word of this masterpiece because of the gentle way you have caressed your words and placed them on the page with loving hands...
Kudos from me :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Spirits soaring toward the heavens

Spiraling upward, intertwining in sync

A quite beautiful write of love's euphoria

expressed so nicely in loving words~Fran Marie






Posted 12 Years Ago


Amanda, your words have a way of embracing the reader, and this is celestial love,
as you have the ability to capture such thoughts, the feeling is sentimental
and very well written, absolutely beautifull expressed and a pleasure to read,
flow with sincerity and heart stirring adoration, quite endearing and timeless

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such sweet euphoria
Elevated by the touch of everlasting
Faith and conviction

Beautiful piece about trusting today, enjoying the moments of blissful surrender. You have captured this feeling brilliantly, Amanda. Love takes us higher and higher...indeed, enveloping mind and heart.

Understanding that tomorow poses uncertainty brings an added touch of realism to the read.

Excellent choice of colors, and the photo is quite powerful.

Undoubtedly one of your finest pieces that I have read thus far.
xxx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely A!!! And the colors.. the graphic ... both are wonderful. LOVE colors!! They really truly add to this piece. The graphic is awesome.

"Sharing this with you,
Living for today in the light
Cherishing what we have together
Not worrying about tomorrow
For whatever may be�"


Enjoyed the entire piece. This stanza in particular as it focuses on living in the moment, which is truly the only thing we know for certain. This moment. And it will always be -- this moment.

"For whatever may be...." :)
Perfect ending. Well written girl!

Loved this !




Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

absoulutely wonderful!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful!! Your prose just rolls off the page Amanda, it is always clear to me when I read whether a writer is seriously in love and you girl are on fire!!! I loved every word of this masterpiece because of the gentle way you have caressed your words and placed them on the page with loving hands...
Kudos from me :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thats your best poem I know, thats beautiful, full of love to someone very special to you. your imagination is so vivid and you take the reader deep into your very deepest feelings, you let him expose your soul with you. great writting Yossi

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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