fading away

fading away

A Poem by Amanda
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...a reluctant farewell to something that was once very important to me...

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fading away

deep inside, i felt something
in the recesses of my heart,
the presence that was you
gradually is fading away

once, you were  
in my every waking thought,
the very essence of my existence,
my someone special...

time and distance
made what we had
an unattainable dream
no matter how much
i wanted it, we wanted it...

despite the feelings we had,
the common ground
could not be reached
love doesn't conquer all

with this realization,
i bid a reluctant farewell
to what we once had
and hope that one day
fate will bring us back
to what we once were
together...


agtovar  22 april 2010

© 2010 Amanda


Author's Note

Amanda
...had my computer revamped and haven't had a chance to install Word back into it...AT

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Great picture choice for the poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


Can't let go, love has its own destination, Time bends and teases us all , we keep reaching only to fall.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wonderful and powerful with a lot of imagery !
I liked the flow and the ending was perfect ! Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was beautiful, the imagery was so strong here in this piece that I can almost feel that emotion of being faded away..
"time and distance
made what we had
an unattainable dream" - I LOVED these lines like anything, I mean...the way with which you have come up with these lines is simply beyond my comprehension...it is so beautiful!

"fate will bring us back
to what we once were
together..." - The piece ended perfectly here, leaving behind a trace of hope and the existence of two hearts beating together..
LOVED this piece Amanda, I hope you will be back here soon, very soon...

Posted 11 Years Ago


A most telling piece of poetry. It is said that the hardest part of love, is letting go. That may seem difficult and sometimes beyond comprehension, but eventually it is what has to be done. There is a certain feeling of remorse, but also a feeling of satisfaction. Great write.

JS

Posted 11 Years Ago


Some times love doesn't bring two people together but will always live in their hearts... a beautiful piece of writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


aching beautiful. i loved the hushness in the wording. yummy job AT

Posted 11 Years Ago



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