The Voyager's Moaning

Written : Mar 4th, 2010 - Thursday - 6:12 PM

[ The Voyager's Moaning ]


I, the nightly Ego Arcane:
   the breath of every flaming Sun
I, the singing, O, humble rain:
   the melodies of every chanting Pun
Journeyed of wounds and agony, I
   bleeding of this very lovely one
Loudly heard was my cold sigh
   echoed in ears of my lovely one
How awkward came the unexpected
   broke to where it was undone
The story is no longer neglected
   It descends where it once begun

( © 2010 - Ahmad Alhour, All Rights Reserved )

Reviews

[darem aq.]

astonishing ! u managed to deliver its full meaning through such few words ! excellent choice of words. keep it up fella !!