Summer Rain..by Michael

Summer Rain..by Michael

A Poem by Michael Reisman


Summer rain fell and washed the plants and flowers.


They grew and flourished beneath the warm sun as they


Slept through the evening hours under the moon and stars.


Birds and butterflies flapped their wings as they


Shook their legs dry once again which rejuvenated


Their souls. It poured down my face beyond the smile of my lips


And made me new once again. She stood beside me


At an outdoor wedding where no umbrellas were held.


It was there that we grew together and became one.


A cricket rubbed its legs together and a bird flaps its wings.


Some fireflies lit up the event as a few frogs croaked a song


That was heard only by the bride and groom.


    We paused from our indoor honeymoon suite


The next summer and went outside to enjoy and


Thank the summer rain...

© 2015 Michael Reisman


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There's a great deal of beautiful imagery in this poem! I really like the atmosphere you set up with this piece, it really has a "natural" feel to it(if that makes any sense). Fantastic poem sir, fantastic. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michael Reisman

9 Years Ago

Thank you for such a beautiful compliment!
I love this :')
So simple and descriptive, but gets across that utter joy of being with the one you love and finally uniting with them. Very good write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michael Reisman

9 Years Ago

Simplicity says a lot and thank you for this beautiful compliment!
Fabulous write.
I like rain too so it has sweetness of that.
Like it too.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michael Reisman

9 Years Ago

Let me put away my umbrella so we can walk together.
before imagery and great detail that you could visual see, feel and hear everything that you were saying.. loved the ending....nature poetry is so beautiful to experience.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michael Reisman

9 Years Ago

Details tell a story with a painted picture of the entire scene. Glad you like this!
Beautiful write, imagery is crystal clear, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michael Reisman

9 Years Ago

Thank you for enjoying this my friend. The reality of imagination is a powerful thing.

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Michael Reisman
Michael Reisman

Eastchester, NY



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