Mirror, mirror

Monologue of a person who lost his way, and tries to find himself.

Mirror, mirror tell me why, why do I lie?

Why do tears come out of sky?

Why does soul begin to rumble?

Why does sorrow make me crumble?

Mirror, mirror who am I?

Who began to bleed and cry?

Who chose hate to rule his fate?

Who forsake himself and left alone?

Who began to dream of home?

 

Mirror, mirror show the truth,

Show me dreams I had in youth.

Show me hope and show me light,

Show me love that shines so bright.

Show me home and calm my mind,

Stop this madness, make me kind.

Author's Note

Hope you like it. Please tell me what you think about it, regardless you like it or not :)

Reviews

[just is]

I really enjoyed this write, thought it was written really well.

[Lokesh]

A good write-up.

[MOON]

Very good writing like a prayer to yourself.

[StruckByLightning]

Overall, I like the poem quality and the meaning, but maybe you can incorporate a rhythm or beat?

[Patrick B]

I thought it was a great write. It has a nice flow to it, and the kind of moral behind it. Good job! Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.
Sounds like a fair trade, no?

[mariah]

nice work, interesting presepective too. makes me think of someone who is confused and dosent know who they are anymore.
-mariah