Karma

Karma

A Poem by A.J. Thompson

Bridges burning in the flames of fury
Extinguished only when forgiveness wins
Or when the breeze of life
Blows the embers of charred lumber
In the path that I walk

© 2014 A.J. Thompson


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It's a nice poem. Better then many that I've ever seen.
Good job :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


love that... short and lovely

Posted 9 Years Ago


Metaphors are always fun to use and this poem use that perfectly. Very distinctive in it's wording and might I add very insightful. Seems to me each word has a meaning that the audience must figure out just lovely.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's so short but so good, awesome job on it!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ha! Love that!
Nice job, very clever.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 22, 2014
Last Updated on November 24, 2014
Tags: karma, life, lessons, learning, forgivenss

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A.J. Thompson
A.J. Thompson

Cleveland, OH



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