the lost sea

lost sea
ocean apart from
life and death
tears were left here long
dozen memories
lost through the sea of pain
so long ago this forgotten

Reviews

[Norma M Sutton]

I like the shortness of this poem. It covers a lot of territory in just a few lines. Nice

[momo]

its good but you should keep on with it! like add more to it you can make an awesome story behind this poem