Middle Class Angst

Middle Class Angst

A Poem by A.K.F
"

I'm filled with such pain, Like a black hole.

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Middle Class Angst

I’m filled with such pain,

Like a black hole I bottle it up inside.

My parents are too protective,

Like a shield I never asked for.

I have no friends,

except the people I hang out with.

I’m so dark inside,

Like a black hole.


School is stupid,

Like, something that is really stupid.

Like, Hitler or something.

Hallways are cramped.

We are forced to learn against our will.

It’s like we’re stuck in a concentration camp.

...or a black hole.


I look up, I look down.

I look left, I look right.

I look diagonally to the left and up.

I look diagonally to the left and down.

I look diagonally the the right and down.

I never look diagonally to the right and down, though.

That direction is for hipsters.

Problems reside in every direction.

Or at least the ones that matter.

Taxes, bills, college, … taxes.

These problems bottle up inside

and will be the death of us.



Like a black hole.


© 2015 A.K.F


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this reminded me so much of Pink Floyd...."we don't need no education, we don't need no thought control"

i like the tone and the conversational style, which fits this one well...throw that education and sophistication out the window...what good will it do us in the end?

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.K.F

8 Years Ago

I appreciate the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it.



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Btw block that jayg guy, seems like he missed a few doses on his pills.

Beautiful poem, I understand it perfectly. Great work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.K.F

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review! While me and him certainly have conflicting opinions, I will leave his review.. read more
Alucard6336

8 Years Ago

Btw I researched that guy. He's been banned off several writing forums and sites. His name online is.. read more
Alucard6336

8 Years Ago

Heck I hate my autocorrect. Lol but yeah I'm going to friend you here it lets me see when you post n.. read more
In this you're writing for yourself. Good therapy, and an outlet for angst, perhaps, but also so highly personal that to an outsider who isn't in your situation it reads as, "Oh s**t...I'm stuck in school and I think life sucks. Think about moving your reader emotionally by making them be you, and feel what you feel, not just hear your complaint.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A.K.F

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review! You may be taking this piece a bit too literal. This is actually more of a mo.. read more
JayG

8 Years Ago

The problem is that intent never makes it past the keyboard. So what you say must pass the internal .. read more
this reminded me so much of Pink Floyd...."we don't need no education, we don't need no thought control"

i like the tone and the conversational style, which fits this one well...throw that education and sophistication out the window...what good will it do us in the end?

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.K.F

8 Years Ago

I appreciate the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Added on December 7, 2015
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A.K.F
A.K.F

Barberton, OH



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I am currently a college student who has unfortunately forgotten what sleep even is. What little spare time I have is dedicated to writing and video games. As you can tell I'm a very worldly individua.. more..

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