THAT DAY I WAS ALONE

THAT DAY I WAS ALONE

A Poem by Akshita

THAT DAY I WAS ALONE

                            That day i was alone,
Nobody cared for me,nothing left for me,
And I was like ignored,
That day i was alone...
My heart throbbed when I saw a shadow,
But it was just a fake one,
I was lonely,I was afraid,
But nobody thought of giving my heart a first aid,
And this lead me to drone,
That day i was alone...
Then again i saw someone coming towards me,
She switched on the lamp,and wept off my tears, she was someone,my dear one, No one other,but my MOTHER....

© 2013 Akshita


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Aw, very beautiful. I like it. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


A very tender poem. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


aaw.. this one is cute! You should show this one to your Mom. She'll like it! :)
Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like it :) it feels really real :D

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Akshita
Akshita

ajmer, rajsthan, India



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