In my dream

                                                         IN MY DREAM

Today, i met a boy of nine,

lost in his own world he was standing under an alpine....

His eyes was eager to recite the story

of his silent heart,

this curiosity made me to follow his forthcoming path....

The journey ends in front of a small dusty cottage,

untouched for many years,

looking at it his eyes was filled with unspeakable tears.....

I was confused,unless i saw the hanged nameplate,

LATE MR.& MRS.DANIEL

Standing on a sort of dock, i fainted down

as it gave me an immense shock.....

After few seconds i opened my eyes, and came to know,

it didn't actually happened with a boy so nice....

as it was just "IN MY DREAM"..........

 

Reviews

[Saddam]

a very touchable story of dream....very nice poem is this....very good imagination and emotions.

[Pradeep Nair]

it was a real good narration....
rare and precious...

[Gaurav]

Really sweet ^_^ the opening lines were just too fine...

[Balkaran Sidhu]

nice one here...liked the pic too...could have added a couple of more lines i feel...anyway enjoed it ..keep writing

[Rahul]

It could be a great story if you write i think..don't ya thnk !
nicely penned, as a poem it's filled with reality indeed ;) 100/100

[msharma]

Great picturization alongwith a grabbing story.