The World

This is a poem about the way the world has become

The people are standing frailer

The wind is blowing harder

Feeding on all the lost souls it comes across

 

The sun is getting weaker

The night is growing stronger

Hiding all those things you do in the dark

 

The fish are swimming closer

The waves are getting harsher

Crushing everything in their path

 

The grave is getting colder

The light is shining brighter

Burning all the lonely hopes

 

The vultures ravaging the dead

The merciless scavanging the weak

The lonely ones drying up the their tears

The stoners bleeding away all their fears

Reviews

[0_o Abbie]

Also, I'd be friends with whoever that is that gave you a moose in your comment. :D Just saying. That's a nice moose. A very nice moose. And cute too. :D

[0_o Abbie]

Wow! Really well written!

wow its like a big event is just getting closer with each line. great work!

[seeeker78]

Excellent write, thanks, the unfortunate thing is that it is spot on regarding todays world.Cheers

[Wicahpi]

[deeps]

The grave is getting colder
The light is shining brighter
Burning all the lonely hopes

Ah! Loved this, You are very talented.
I like your writes so far. Amazing write here.