I hope

I hope

A Poem by al25

I will walk alone in the dark

I wont be scared of anything other than you

I will say what I want

I will standup for those who cant

I will fight those who think they are stronger

 

I will work as hard as I can

Just to please you

I will not let you down

I may make some mistakes

But I will always be back on my knees

Begging for your forgiveness

 

I can only take so much

But I hope my time has finally come

I apologize for my impatience

There's no excuse

I know

But Im only human

 

I can feel it

This emptiness disappearing

I thank you for your grace

© 2011 al25


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You know what I change my mind this is about you. This is about you and your fight to finally be good enough for that girl you love, then finally you win her over and you realize you've been good all along. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Maybe a brainwashed guy who thinks he's being heroic??? sorry. :D I liked it tho.

Posted 8 Years Ago


god? this is a great poem.and thanks for your review;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


This one rocks!!!! I so loved the emotion in this amazing piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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