Falling Apart

Falling Apart

A Poem by al25

Are you the one to blame

Or is it me?

 

Feel like its impossible

Running away from this

 

I wish that I could make it

But I cant

 

Feel like giving up

Hiding under the covers

 

Im falling apart

Tears wont run down my face

Im falling apart

I always thought that I was stronger

Im falling apart

But I swear to you

I wont let it go

I wont fall apart no more 

 

Im falling apart....

© 2011 al25


Author's Note

al25
Wrote this in like 5 minutes. Was feeling a bit down.

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I can relate to this. Really, my poem Always In the Rain was also written when I was feeling down. Poetry sure helps me when I need it, and it's always there for me.

Great work here, really.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Isn't poetry wonderful therapy? So often what we just spill out in 5 minutes is some of our best work because it truly reflects what we hold inside our soul. Excellent.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mis-guided relevance and quickness of timbre, well written, a great read my friend, well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


great expressive movement here~ sometimes writing is not just art but a form of self therapy~ we all do it =)~

Posted 8 Years Ago


And a very accomplished 5 minutes it was. this is a great poem. when you wrote "im falling apart...tears won't run down my face" it reminded me of times when everything is so painful and i just want to cry, but I just can't and i feel like i'm numb. kinda like your chest feels empty, as if theres nowhere to draw tears from. i like the last sentence.

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow... I think I'll go cry for you now. Or give you a hug. Or both... I'll have to decide later. You're so exasperating.

But this is a nice poem. It's cool. :-/

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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al25
al25

College Station, TX



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