Feel Something

Feel Something

A Poem by al25

Not sure I understand

This road Im taking

I think all day long

Trying to figure this out

But my mind speaks

And I cant seem to comprehend


I need to feel again

I need to feel something


Im always exhausted

But I can't seem to get myself to sleep

I take a drive

Try to talk to myself

But instead I sit in silence

Dreaming when Im awake


I need to feel again

I need to feel something


I scare myself to death

And I just cant help it

There's something missing

And I can't deny it any longer

Why don't you give me a hand

Please don't just leave me here


I need you

I need to feel again

I need to feel something

© 2011 al25

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haven't read any poems in a while and this was the perfect welcome back into it. love the intensity when you say "i need to feel..."

Posted 7 Years Ago

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an extremely poignant piece of writing
that "need" often leads us out of
feeling numb
or so i think

Posted 8 Years Ago

This was great and relatable.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 8 Years Ago

Wow, this is great! I can feel the aching need so strongly in my heart. Great emotion! I loved it, and I can totally relate, which makes this piece even better, to me.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I can relate because I always feel like something's missing.
Good write.

Posted 8 Years Ago

always exhausted, just can't help it.......don't understand the road I'm taking....just can't get myself to sleep........something missing.....you.....I need you.....I need to feel...........anything......excellent

Posted 8 Years Ago

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