July Ninth

July Ninth

A Poem by smilemore

This was a day full of smiles,
I haven't felt like this in a while.
Being with you brings me joy,
For me you are the most perfect boy.
Your brown hair and blue eyes,
When I look at you i'm mesmerized.

Your touch is so pure,
It's my addiction, with no cure.
The sound of your voice I crave,
So beautiful like ocean waves.
Hold me tight, it feels so right,
Being with you is such a delight.

When we kiss sparks fly,
I know that's cliche, but I can't deny.
I'm so happy to have met you,
With you everything is so exciting and new.
Hopeful for building our relationship more,
For you and your love, I adore.








© 2019 smilemore


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Author's Note

smilemore
A poem based off a new relationship

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this is such a sweet write, nicely written


Posted 7 Months Ago


This is so sweeeet! I understand your excitement of a new relationship. Many poems come from them ;). I like your rhyming. I will try to remember to do as your name suggests. Well written.

James

Posted 10 Months Ago


smilemore

8 Months Ago

Thank you!
This is so well written, and the feelings are amazing

Posted 1 Year Ago


smilemore

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much!
Ah lovely to hear about new raw love you wrote about it well enjoy 😉

Posted 1 Year Ago


smilemore

1 Year Ago

Thank you!!
Lovely to read about your new relationship! This is so well written as well, it has the right amount of detail to keep it interesting but not too much that its spelled out for the reader. Look forward to reading more of your work :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


smilemore

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! Im glad you enjoyed it (:
A delight to read about your new found joy with your perfect boy. May you always remain content and happy without an ounce of pain. You penned your poem well, I might add.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


smilemore

1 Year Ago

Thank you!

the joy you feel in this new relationship is evident in the words you have crafted and pinned to this page....

Posted 1 Year Ago



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