The Heart Song

The Heart Song

A Poem by Sincerely, Alex
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Heart Songs never fade to a voiceless hum.

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A heart song never fades to a voiceless hum

Heart songs battle and tear

They flow in harmony with kisses that bite and kisses that soak

Weep, thrash, and pray

Laugh, dance, and stay

My heart song for you plays to this day

A broken rhyme, a guitar that snapped

Keys of a piano that flew to a grave

A land without wonder, a heart song could not travel

A timeless time wears on it

But not once did the key-less piano stop playing

Nor the string-less guitar

For it's melody is wavering in tune for you

A heart song never fades to a voiceless hum

Once it begins, it ceases to end

© 2011 Sincerely, Alex


Author's Note

Sincerely, Alex
Basically, this means once you love someone, you never stop loving them.
I just took it to a more extreme level.

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love these lines:
"Keys of a piano that flew to a grave
A land without wonder, a heart song could not travel
A timeless time wears on it
But not once did the key-less piano stop playing
Nor the string-less guitar"
your words really speak for themselves very nicely,
Great Job!


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the associations in this are sublime

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow I see u have took it to another level, i would have never thought of something like this. I love the part about the guitar and piano! Great and creative write it was absolutely beautiful! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Once again my dear, you leave me speechless. Absolutely beautiful.

"A broken rhyme, a guitar that snapped

Keys of a piano that flew to a grave

I love you, and your wonderful writing brain

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful write. Enjoyed the flow
the content in which you display
with authority. Very well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good work.

Keep exercising your talent.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent imagery, strong and believable tone. A good read all in all.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was so heart-warming [the irony...] and it was really beautiful and sincere. I like how you took it to a higher level, it was so much more specific, and it said alot more. Amazing piece, I loved reading this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love these lines:
"Keys of a piano that flew to a grave
A land without wonder, a heart song could not travel
A timeless time wears on it
But not once did the key-less piano stop playing
Nor the string-less guitar"
your words really speak for themselves very nicely,
Great Job!


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've missed reading your work Alex! xD
This is amazing, like always. I had never really considered the whole idea of a heartsong before, but reading your poem definitely made me think about it.
"My heart song for you plays to this day/A broken rhyme, a guitar that snapped/Keys of a piano that flew to a grave" is a mindblowing section! This poem held a lot of truth, and a lot of insight. The emotion behind your words were priceless. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sincerely this was great!
I wrote a poem called heartsongs as well.

And you're right, you never do stop loving them.
Antonio

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 22, 2010
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Tags: The Heart Song, Heart, Song, Heart Song, Love, Never, Dies, Love never dies, Music, Guitar, Piano, Tune

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