Broken Heart

Broken Heart

A Poem by Alicia Huntley

Struggling to deal

I feel like I am always losing control

The feeling keeps coming back 

and taking hold. 

I am scared and I am lost

I am hurt and am torn. 

I am searching for you

but there is no response. 

The light only comes at a glimpse

Enough to know I reside in the dark. 

I feel love enough to know 

I have a broken heart. 

© 2014 Alicia Huntley


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very nice writing... I m glad that I took a moment to read this

Posted 10 Years Ago


Alicia Huntley

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Rock

10 Years Ago

You are very much welcome
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Sam
Touching remarks, well versed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A amazing poem. You had said a lot in so few words. When the darkness overtake us. We know all is lost. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Alicia Huntley

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I am so happy you like it!
Welcome fellow Canadian, this is a nice little piece about an end of romance. You clearly have an understanding of this theme, my suggestion would be for your next piece is to explore something else.

Keep up the good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Alicia Huntley

10 Years Ago

Thanks and will do! Just working stuff out of my system.
Wow. That was well written. Good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Alicia Huntley

10 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Alicia Huntley
Alicia Huntley

Ottawa, Canada



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