Perfect Fairytale

Perfect Fairytale

A Poem by alison13
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it just came out from nowhere.. :)

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Perfect Fairytale

 

I dreamed of having a perfect fairytale

You as the prince

And I as the princess

Everything was suppose to be perfect

Everything was all planned up

Until reality came into a stop

And ruined it all.

 

The night I saw you

I was quickly mesmerized

The way you look, the way you walk,

The way you talk, the way you laugh,

You made my heart beat faster.

I never thought the day I always dreamt of

Could possibly happen.

 

People were dancing close

As the lights started to dim,

I was sitting with my friends

Waiting for you to notice me.

I flickered to you every five seconds

And hope for a chance that you’ll look at me too.

 

A few dances were done,

But I still hoped for you to ask me

Just one touch of your hand

And I'd be in heaven.

 

As the last dance was said,

I sat down quietly

And waited for only a miracle could do.

Everything was not in place

You’re dancing with another girl

 

As I sat down thinking what

Could have I done wrong.

But then again,

There is really no perfect fairytale

In the world of reality.

© 2010 alison13


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simply a wonderful read

Posted 13 Years Ago


"As the last dance was said,
I sat down quietly
And waited for only a miracle could do.
Everything was not in place
You’re dancing with another girl"

"There is really no perfect fairytale
In the world of reality."

{a very ethereal poem--great poetry}

james:-)



Posted 13 Years Ago


this has happened to me too. it sucks. :( but there are a lot of people out there that would be lucky enough to have you.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A nice fairy tale.
Well, you already know what I'm gonna say

Posted 14 Years Ago


This dream is vibrant and fill with love:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow this was sad. i guess fantasy caught up with reality. This kinda reminded me of one of my fave songs by paramore called "brick by boribg brick." As a part of it goes. "Keep your feet on the ground, when your'e head is in the the clouds."

Posted 14 Years Ago


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aww.. let him be .. get some other guy ;) haha.. I liked reading this... Just check out the tenses 2nd para. Other than that well written. Dreams are sometimes so far removed from reality that its painful.. But some way or the other dreams do come true (or so I've heard ;) )

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice. great poem. :)
i really like this. This is quite amazing. Yeah there may be no perfect fairytale, still, it depends upon us how we can me our own perfect. XD

Posted 14 Years Ago


There is really no perfect fairytale
In the world of reality.

i like that line.. there's something in it that makes me sad.. great job.. really enjoyed it..

Posted 14 Years Ago


@alison13 ok ok.. i'm sorry... :)) hope that HE is your last dance....

Posted 14 Years Ago



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