Stroke Me.

Stroke Me.

A Poem by Tinotenda Nyevedzanai
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Poem - ATC

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"Stroke me" he would whisper softly,
when we were alone of course, he was far too
manly to cradle in my arms in front of company.
So we sat for hours and I held him close,
We said nothing, we did nothing
We let the Love do the communicating
Flowing back and forth between us.
Forty years seemed to fly right by
rarely noticing  wrinkles or freckles come and go
meaninglessly we were still always simply him and me
Teasing at our aging playing with our family,
Whatever hurt us we got through, until the curse
Medically the irreversible worst,
Paralyzed physically the nurse came,
told me that he had lost his speech
during the stroke, that it would never return
I remember the last words he spoke,
"I Love You." 
So we sat for hours and I held him close,
We said nothing, we did nothing
We let the Love do the communicating
Flowing back and forth between us.
Frustrated, he was always a man that
would throw a tantrum if he couldn't get
what he wanted and when I didn't understand
he would flip out, scare me, I only wanted to help.
The carer came and went, I knew that he hated her
That he despised the speech therapy,
But to me the stroke was meaningless we were still
simply him and me. 

© 2015 Tinotenda Nyevedzanai


Author's Note

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai
Challenge - Spent 40 years married then the husband had a stroke and lost their speech, paralyzed and frustrated that he can't express his thoughts properly.

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The speech therapy was kind of a paradox. I could imagine him doing his best to
recover at moments just to be able to tell the therapist to go away. This sentimental
work can slow things down and have us to appreciate all that we have at the moment,

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)



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A beautiful and sad poem. After 40 years together. People will form a strong bond. I liked the story in the poem leading to the every good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Nice wording in this one!
Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

9 Years Ago

Thank you Emily :):)
The speech therapy was kind of a paradox. I could imagine him doing his best to
recover at moments just to be able to tell the therapist to go away. This sentimental
work can slow things down and have us to appreciate all that we have at the moment,

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This is powerful and beautiful. So much emotion ~

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

9 Years Ago

Cheers dear :)
beautiful, just simply beautiful!!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

9 Years Ago

Thanks you very much :)
Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

you are very welcome.
So powerfully beautiful that even when the verbal communication ceased the love continued. This is an example of true love. Good write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

9 Years Ago

thanks very much :)
This ended up being a lot more emotional than I thought it would get. I'm impressed, I like it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

9 Years Ago

Thank you I'm glad you liked it

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Tinotenda Nyevedzanai
Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

Dallas, Kent



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