Snow Flakes

Dancing against the black sky
Entwining themselves within my hair
Teasing me
Taunting the moon
Caressing my face ever so softly
Falling until they lay on the ground
Making the air freeze like death
Burying everything in their path
Colliding with trees
Turning my tears into ice
Finally impossible to wipe away

Reviews

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

A interesting poem written beautifully and intensely. The imagery comes to life and makes the reader feel like they're in a snow globe.

[Hello, Goodbye]

I like the way you always conclude your poems.. they give the body a nice resolute conclusion.