Hunger Dreams

Hunger Dreams

A Poem by AlisshalovesBrandon

Wanting,
Needing,
Craving
The touch
Fingers lingering on my skin
Burning sensation in my heart
My skin burning for the touch
The sweet voice singing me to sleep
Always never enough
Always more than i can take
Sometimes i wonder if it will ever satisfy my hunger..

© 2010 AlisshalovesBrandon


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It is more than she can take and yet she wonders if it will ever satisfy her hunger? Yes spoken like only the flesh can speak fill me to the brim and then fill me some more because it was good. I can relate to these desires and cravings that ache inside to be fulfilled. Good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I really enjoy this write! I feel this way a lot of my own time. You have a way with your words. :) I'm hocked, now!

~S. D. Blankenship

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another short and simple poem filled with emotion. I love it...the way it progresses is amazing. Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It is more than she can take and yet she wonders if it will ever satisfy her hunger? Yes spoken like only the flesh can speak fill me to the brim and then fill me some more because it was good. I can relate to these desires and cravings that ache inside to be fulfilled. Good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem of brevity.. I like the structure and its flow.. The message is clear also.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 1, 2010
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AlisshalovesBrandon
AlisshalovesBrandon

Marion, OH



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i am 16 years old, i live in Ohio (which is one the yuckiest states) still in high school, not trying to be dramatic because my life pretty much sucks except for a few things, , my animals, and my fri.. more..

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